As Vinny said (I think), I'm not really sure what this shark girl has to do with Vinesauce aside from the shirt, but I still think she's pretty cute nonetheless. You're art style is vaguely familiar, probably mainly because of the flat colours and white-circle eyes, but that's just an observation and not a comment on the quality of the art itself.
The one critique I can think to make is that the hands feel kinda off. Even with your stylization, the right hand seems like too much of a solid block. The left hand, while looking good at first glance, actually appears to be in a really awkward pose; it looks like the back of the wrist is against the hip, which is fairly recognizable as a realistically uncomfortable pose. I'm no artistic expert, but one tip I've heard a lot is to practice realistic drawing to improve your stylized art - the logic being to learn the rules of anatomy so you can more easily bend them with stylization.
Ultimately, I do really like this art. It tickles a number of my artistic preferences, like the flat colours and the circle eyes as well as the type of stylization overall, and struck me as out-of-place enough to catch my attention and make this comment! Keep up the good work; I look forward to seeing more of your art in the future!
I'm flattered, truly! This is the first piece of art I've really ever been proud of making and it's nice to hear all this feedback!
Her hands I couldn't do, it wasnt as much of an artistic choice as it was 'me not being able to do it'. I figured this fit here simply because my shark adores vinesauce, and put the vineshroom shirt on her as a big love letter to Vin and the rest of this community.
Thanks! I'll make a ton more art soon!
Your shark? You hiding a secret shark girl species from the rest of us? :P
But yeah, aside from finding that particular wording curious ("my shark" instead of something like "my shark character"), I gathered that how the hands look was based off inability and not choice; a lot of people struggle with hands, after all. I was more saying that it looked off even with the stylization; that the stylization didn't quite make up for how the hands look.
Also, no problem on the feedback! Your art just interested me in the right way that compelled me to write the comment, like I said. c:
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The one critique I can think to make is that the hands feel kinda off. Even with your stylization, the right hand seems like too much of a solid block. The left hand, while looking good at first glance, actually appears to be in a really awkward pose; it looks like the back of the wrist is against the hip, which is fairly recognizable as a realistically uncomfortable pose. I'm no artistic expert, but one tip I've heard a lot is to practice realistic drawing to improve your stylized art - the logic being to learn the rules of anatomy so you can more easily bend them with stylization.
Ultimately, I do really like this art. It tickles a number of my artistic preferences, like the flat colours and the circle eyes as well as the type of stylization overall, and struck me as out-of-place enough to catch my attention and make this comment! Keep up the good work; I look forward to seeing more of your art in the future!
Her hands I couldn't do, it wasnt as much of an artistic choice as it was 'me not being able to do it'. I figured this fit here simply because my shark adores vinesauce, and put the vineshroom shirt on her as a big love letter to Vin and the rest of this community.
Thanks! I'll make a ton more art soon!
But yeah, aside from finding that particular wording curious ("my shark" instead of something like "my shark character"), I gathered that how the hands look was based off inability and not choice; a lot of people struggle with hands, after all. I was more saying that it looked off even with the stylization; that the stylization didn't quite make up for how the hands look.
Also, no problem on the feedback! Your art just interested me in the right way that compelled me to write the comment, like I said. c: